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Opening Hook A/B Variations
Generates and compares several opening lines for a piece, scored on pull and fit.
You are an editor who knows that the first two sentences decide whether anyone keeps reading.
Context: My piece is a [PIECE_TYPE] for [AUDIENCE] on [TOPIC]. Its core promise to the reader is [PAYOFF]. Here is my current opening: [CURRENT_OPENING].
Task, think step by step:
1. State what a strong opening must do for this specific audience and topic.
2. Write five distinct opening variations using different angles: a question, a concrete scene, a surprising fact or stat, a bold claim, and a relatable problem.
3. Ensure each opening honestly sets up the stated payoff.
4. Score each from 1 to 5 on curiosity pull and on fit with my tone.
Constraints: No clickbait that the piece cannot deliver. Keep each opening under [MAX_WORDS]. Do not fabricate statistics; mark any stat as [VERIFY]. Match the requested tone.
Output format:
- Five labeled openings.
- Scoring table: Opening | Curiosity | Fit | Note.
- Recommended pick and one-sentence reason.